750-1000 words (1 page has approximately 250-300 words)
In-text and final APA style referencing
2 reliable web sources and 2 scholarly articles (from Google Scholar)
Steps to writing a research essay
1. Choose a topic (Oct 4)
The Causes of Wars
2. Post a working outline (2%) Oct 5
Outline
Thesis:- Propagation of religion, border dispute and achieve justice are the main and the most common causes that countries usually announce as reason for entering wars, but throughout history the real reason to start war is economic purposes.
Main idea 1:- Exploitation religion for economic purposes. - Propagation of religion as an excuse to start war. -Theeconomic purposes as real reason to start war. -The crusades war as an example.
Main idea 2:- The border dispute between neighboring countries for economic purposes. - The border skirmishes as an excuse to start war. - Theeconomic purposes as real reason to start war. -Kuwait and Iraq war as an example.
Main idea 3:- Most of the countries are taking achieve justice as a reason to fight, but they actually fight for economic purposes. - A chive justice as an excuse to start war. - Theeconomic purposes as real reason to start war. -United States wars as an example.
In conclusion:- In fact, throughout history and until today nation's fight for many reasons. Even though nations announce religion, border dispute and achieve justice as causes to fight, the real and most important cause of wars is economic purposes.
This article published by Oxford University. The information in this book is free of bias because it published from Oxford University, and the website is up-to-date. The information related to my research topic because it has an example to Kuwait and Iraq war
Armed,Prof. Thomas F. Madden .(1999 ).The Historical Armed Combat Association copyright.Retrieved from http://www.thearma.org/essays/Crusades.htm This article published by John Clements in 1999.The author of this article is Prof. Thomas F. Madden.The website is up-to-date. I am going to use the information to give an example and to explain the concept of border.
Iam going to use the the information to explain the economic purposes.
Michael E. Woods.(2012).Journal of American History.What Twenty-First-Century Historians Have Said about the Causes of Disunion: A Civil War Sesquicentennial Review of the Recent Literature ,99(2), 440-465.
Iam going to use the the information to give an example to the main idea 3 and also to explain some of the historical reasons.
6. Revise your outline (2%) Oct 12
Thesis:- Propagation of religion(Jack, s.2010) (Armed,Prof.1999), border dispute (Jack, s.2010) ( M,Khadduri.1997)and achiev justice(Jack, s.2010) (Michael E,2010) are the main and the most common causes that countries usually announce as reason for entering wars, but throughout history the real reason to start war is economic purposes(Jack, s.2010).
Main idea 1:- Exploitation religion for economic purposes. - Propagation of religion as an excuse to start war(Jack, s.2010). -Theeconomic purposes as real reason to start war(Jack, s.2010). -The crusades war as an example(Armed,Prof.1999)..
Main idea 2:- The border dispute between neighboring countries for economic purposes. - The border skirmishes as an excuse to start war(Jack, s.2010). - Theeconomic purposes as real reason to start war(Jack, s.2010). -Kuwait and Iraq war as an example( M,Khadduri.1997).
. Main idea 3:- Most of the countries are taking achieve justice as a reason to fight, but they actually fight for economic purposes. - A chive justice as an excuse to start war(Jack, s.2010). - Theeconomic purposes as real reason to start war(Jack, s.2010). -United States wars as an example(Michael E,2010)..
In conclusion:- In fact, throughout history and until today nation's fight for many reasons. Even though nations announce religion(Jack, s.2010) (Armed,Prof.1999), border dispute(Jack, s.2010)(Michael E,2010)and achieve justice (Jack, s.2010)( M,Khadduri.1997)as causes to fight, the real and most important cause of wars is economic purposes.
7. Write and edit your draft (90%) Oct 15-19
The Causes of Wars
The history of the mankind are history of wars. Mankind history are full of wars, and there are various types of wars such as attacks, border skirmishes and raids to low-intensity conflicts. Also there are various causes to start wars. Countries announce many different causes to justify why they to fight. Religion(Jack,s.2010), border dispute (Jack,s.2010) and ache justice (Jack,s.2010) are the main and the most common causes that countries usually announce as reason to start war, but the real reason to start war is economic purposes.
Throughout mankind history, nations use religion as an excuse to start war, but actually they start war for economic reason such as avarice and greed in other nation's wealth (Jack, s.2010). Religion has always been a wonderful an excuse to fight. Leaderships exploit nation's emotions in the name of religion to lead them to start wars. Leaderships know that they get more support from individuals by using religion as an excuse to fight (Jack, s.2010). Also they know that religion makes soldiers who are supposed to die fight with more enthusiastically (Jack, s.2010). Take, for instance, Crusades is the most famous historically religious war. Crusades that took place for about 200 years in Europe use religion as an excuse to start war. The leaders of this war made people fight in the name of God. In fact religion was not the mine reason for this war. The real reason for this war was economic reason. In that time king want to have more land and money to the empire. Church bless this war because it wants to expand its power. By the end of this war which was not successful to achieve its religious goal. However, it was successful to achieve the economic reason(Armed,Prof.1999). Because of the fact that dying in the name of the religion makes soldiers feel very prouder than dying in the name of a greedy king who wants to get jewels or a piece of land, Leaderships use religion as an excuse to fight.
The border dispute between neighboring countries for economic purposes (Jack, s.2010). Nations always border skirmishes because greed in the fortunes of the neighboring countries. However, nations never said that they fight because economic purposes (Jack, s.2010). Nations use maintains its territorial integrity as an excuse to fight and owns territorial. If the disputed region does not has any natural wealth such as Gold, Oil and Gas, in most cases countries give up territory in exchange for money or for any other positive effect. Stopping the war will be complicated or impossible, if the disputed has natural wealth (Jack, s.2010).For example, Kuwait is one of the biggest counters in the world that exporters oil. In 1990 Iraq invasion launched on Kuwait by claiming that Kuwait was part of Iraq. In fact Iraq did not invasion launched Kuwait because it is part of Iraq. Iraq want to controls Kuwait Oil. In fact, the border dispute between neighboring countries depends on amount wealth the country have.
Most of the countries are taking achieve justice as a reason to fight. They announce assisting societies devastated by conflict or emerging and help them to get rid of the repressive as justify to start wars, but they actually fight for economic purposes. They fight to take the wealth of countries that they claim to help them (Armed, Prof.1999).As an example for this United States has a long history in the wars. United States announce to the international community that ache justice is a reason to start each war such as Operation Restore Hope-Somalia (1993), Operation Enduring Freedom-Afghanistan (2001-present) and Operation Iraqi Freedom-Iraq (2003-present). However, in each war United States ford received an economic benefits, but this is very strange (Michael E, 2010). Because when you enter wars, you must have a financial losses. Unless you enter the wars for economic purposes. Than you will have a good economic results. The economic cause is the real cause that we can find it as reason for United States to start each war not achieve justice. United States is not the only country that taking achieve justice as a reason to fight to get economic benefits, but in the history many country did that.
In fact, throughout history and until today nation's fight for many reasons. Even though nations announce religion (Jack,s.2010) (Armed,Prof.1999), border dispute (Jack,s.2010) and achieve justice (Jack,s.2010) as causes to fight. Countries want to get more power by development their economic.As we can see the real and most important cause of wars is economic purposes.
3-Michael E. Woods. (2012).Journal of American History. What Twenty-First-Century Historians Have Said about the Causes of Disunion: A Civil War Sesquicentennial Review of the Recent Literature, 99(2), 440-465. Retrieved from http://jah.oxfordjournals.org/content/99/2/415.full
Summary (Risa)Although propagation of religion, border dispute and achieve justice cause the war, these have strong relationship with economic purpose. First, sometimes government uses the religious reason to start the war. However, it is just an ostensible reason. For example, the leader used a religious reason to start the war of crusader, but the purpose of this war was expanding the land and raising the money. Consequently, soldiers are able to feel pounder if they fight for not desire of kings or leaders but god. So the lots of government or leaders use the religious reason instead of the economic reason when they launch the war.
Comment
I think your essay is well organized and has relyable evidences. For example, you used an illustration of crusaders. As it was elegant example, I could understand what you want to say. You are also good word choicer. You are very good at using correct word forms. Although your research paper is great, there are some spelling and grammar mistakes. In your first paragraph, you need to reduce “to” between “why they” and “fight.” In the second paragraph, there are also little spelling mistakes. I listed up after this comment. I think your essay will be better if you fixed them. Thank you. Risa♡ >>Second paragraph
Religion has always been a wonderful and excuse for fight.
In fact, religion was not the mine reason for this war
Main reason for this war
Church blesses this war because it wanted to expand its power.
By the end of this war, it wasnot successful to achieve its religious goal.
However, it succeeded to achieve the economic reason
much/far prouder than (you can't use very with comparative words)
king who wants to get jewels or a piece of land, leaders use religion as an excuse to fight
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Table of Contents
Steps to writing a research essay
1. Choose a topic (Oct 4)
The Causes of Wars2. Post a working outline (2%) Oct 5
Outline
Thesis:-
Propagation of religion, border dispute and achieve justice are the main and the most common causes that countries usually announce as reason for entering wars, but throughout history the real reason to start war is economic purposes.
Main idea 1:-
Exploitation religion for economic purposes.
- Propagation of religion as an excuse to start war.
-The economic purposes as real reason to start war.
-The crusades war as an example.
Main idea 2:-
The border dispute between neighboring countries for economic purposes.
- The border skirmishes as an excuse to start war.
- The economic purposes as real reason to start war.
-Kuwait and Iraq war as an example.
Main idea 3:-
Most of the countries are taking achieve justice as a reason to fight, but they actually fight for economic purposes.
- A chive justice as an excuse to start war.
- The economic purposes as real reason to start war.
-United States wars as an example.
In conclusion:-
In fact, throughout history and until today nation's fight for many reasons. Even though nations announce religion, border dispute and achieve justice as causes to fight, the real and most important cause of wars is economic purposes.
3. Find keywords (1%) Oct 5
4. Find and evaluate 2-3 web sources (3%) Oct 9
Oxford University Press,M,Khadduri,E.Ghareeb(1997).War in the Gulf, 1990-91.Retrieved from
http://books.google.ca/books?hl=ar&lr=&id=-WVeDRLCj0EC&oi=fnd&pg=PA1&dq=Kuwait+and+Iraq+war+&ots=CBRzBjsuiP&sig=cp5tRLuy6OCDCNB7-v4ud1zCJdQ&redir_esc=y
This article published by Oxford University. The information in this book is free of bias because it published from Oxford University, and the website is up-to-date. The information related to my research topic because it has an example to Kuwait and Iraq war
Armed,Prof. Thomas F. Madden .(1999 ).The Historical Armed Combat Association copyright.Retrieved from
http://www.thearma.org/essays/Crusades.htm
This article published by John Clements in 1999.The author of this article is Prof. Thomas F. Madden.The website is up-to-date.
I am going to use the information to give an example and to explain the concept of border.
http://daccess-dds-ny.un.org/doc/UNDOC/GEN/N10/472/64/PDF/N1047264.pdf?OpenElement
5. Find 2 academic sources from Google Scholar (2%) Oct 10
Jack S. Levy,William R. Thompson.(2010).Causes of War .Theories of Economic Interdependence and Conflict,7(4),40-74.
Retrieved from
- http://books.google.ca/books?hl=ar&lr=&id=kMsN6sJn9IQC&oi=fnd&pg=PP7&dq=causes+of+war&ots=8wcMpse1Uc&sig=dYT8IjyTCF4yY5nEdLS7OhgqBF0&redir_esc=y
Iam going to use the the information to explain the economic purposes.Michael E. Woods.(2012).Journal of American History.What Twenty-First-Century Historians Have Said about the Causes of Disunion: A Civil War Sesquicentennial Review of the Recent Literature ,99(2), 440-465.
Retrieved from- http://jah.oxfordjournals.org/content/99/2/415.full
Iam going to use the the information to give an example to the main idea 3 and also to explain some of the historical reasons.6. Revise your outline (2%) Oct 12
Thesis:-Propagation of religion(Jack, s.2010) (Armed,Prof.1999), border dispute (Jack, s.2010) ( M,Khadduri.1997)and achiev justice(Jack, s.2010) (Michael E,2010) are the main and the most common causes that countries usually announce as reason for entering wars, but throughout history the real reason to start war is economic purposes(Jack, s.2010).
Main idea 1:-
Exploitation religion for economic purposes.
- Propagation of religion as an excuse to start war(Jack, s.2010).
-The economic purposes as real reason to start war(Jack, s.2010).
-The crusades war as an example(Armed,Prof.1999)..
Main idea 2:-
The border dispute between neighboring countries for economic purposes.
- The border skirmishes as an excuse to start war(Jack, s.2010).
- The economic purposes as real reason to start war(Jack, s.2010).
-Kuwait and Iraq war as an example( M,Khadduri.1997).
.
Main idea 3:-
Most of the countries are taking achieve justice as a reason to fight, but they actually fight for economic purposes.
- A chive justice as an excuse to start war(Jack, s.2010).
- The economic purposes as real reason to start war(Jack, s.2010).
-United States wars as an example(Michael E,2010)..
In conclusion:-
In fact, throughout history and until today nation's fight for many reasons. Even though nations announce religion(Jack, s.2010) (Armed,Prof.1999), border dispute(Jack, s.2010)(Michael E,2010)and achieve justice (Jack, s.2010)( M,Khadduri.1997)as causes to fight, the real and most important cause of wars is economic purposes.
7. Write and edit your draft (90%) Oct 15-19
The Causes of Wars
The history of the mankind are history of wars. Mankind history are full of wars, and there are various types of wars such as attacks, border skirmishes and raids to low-intensity conflicts. Also there are various causes to start wars. Countries announce many different causes to justify why they to fight. Religion(Jack,s.2010), border dispute (Jack,s.2010) and ache justice (Jack,s.2010) are the main and the most common causes that countries usually announce as reason to start war, but the real reason to start war is economic purposes.
Throughout mankind history, nations use religion as an excuse to start war, but actually they start war for economic reason such as avarice and greed in other nation's wealth (Jack, s.2010). Religion has always been a wonderful an excuse to fight. Leaderships exploit nation's emotions in the name of religion to lead them to start wars. Leaderships know that they get more support from individuals by using religion as an excuse to fight (Jack, s.2010). Also they know that religion makes soldiers who are supposed to die fight with more enthusiastically (Jack, s.2010). Take, for instance, Crusades is the most famous historically religious war. Crusades that took place for about 200 years in Europe use religion as an excuse to start war. The leaders of this war made people fight in the name of God. In fact religion was not the mine reason for this war. The real reason for this war was economic reason. In that time king want to have more land and money to the empire. Church bless this war because it wants to expand its power. By the end of this war which was not successful to achieve its religious goal. However, it was successful to achieve the economic reason(Armed,Prof.1999). Because of the fact that dying in the name of the religion makes soldiers feel very prouder than dying in the name of a greedy king who wants to get jewels or a piece of land, Leaderships use religion as an excuse to fight.
The border dispute between neighboring countries for economic purposes (Jack, s.2010). Nations always border skirmishes because greed in the fortunes of the neighboring countries. However, nations never said that they fight because economic purposes (Jack, s.2010). Nations use maintains its territorial integrity as an excuse to fight and owns territorial. If the disputed region does not has any natural wealth such as Gold, Oil and Gas, in most cases countries give up territory in exchange for money or for any other positive effect. Stopping the war will be complicated or impossible, if the disputed has natural wealth (Jack, s.2010).For example, Kuwait is one of the biggest counters in the world that exporters oil. In 1990 Iraq invasion launched on Kuwait by claiming that Kuwait was part of Iraq. In fact Iraq did not invasion launched Kuwait because it is part of Iraq. Iraq want to controls Kuwait Oil. In fact, the border dispute between neighboring countries depends on amount wealth the country have.
Most of the countries are taking achieve justice as a reason to fight. They announce assisting societies devastated by conflict or emerging and help them to get rid of the repressive as justify to start wars, but they actually fight for economic purposes. They fight to take the wealth of countries that they claim to help them (Armed, Prof.1999).As an example for this United States has a long history in the wars. United States announce to the international community that ache justice is a reason to start each war such as Operation Restore Hope-Somalia (1993), Operation Enduring Freedom-Afghanistan (2001-present) and Operation Iraqi Freedom-Iraq (2003-present). However, in each war United States ford received an economic benefits, but this is very strange (Michael E, 2010). Because when you enter wars, you must have a financial losses. Unless you enter the wars for economic purposes. Than you will have a good economic results. The economic cause is the real cause that we can find it as reason for United States to start each war not achieve justice. United States is not the only country that taking achieve justice as a reason to fight to get economic benefits, but in the history many country did that.
In fact, throughout history and until today nation's fight for many reasons. Even though nations announce religion (Jack,s.2010) (Armed,Prof.1999), border dispute (Jack,s.2010) and achieve justice (Jack,s.2010) as causes to fight. Countries want to get more power by development their economic.As we can see the real and most important cause of wars is economic purposes.
Revise:-
1- Armed, Prof. Thomas F. Madden. (1999).The Historical Armed Combat Association copyright. Retrieved from http://www.thearma.org/essays/Crusades.htm
,2- Jack S. Levy, William R. Thompson. (2010).Causes of War .Theories of Economic Interdependence and Conflict, 7(4), 40-74. Retrieved from http://books.google.ca/books?hl=ar&lr=&id=kMsN6sJn9IQC&oi=fnd&pg=PP7&dq=causes+of+war&ots=8wcMpse1Uc&sig=dYT8IjyTCF4yY5nEdLS7OhgqBF0&redir_esc=y
3-Michael E. Woods. (2012).Journal of American History. What Twenty-First-Century Historians Have Said about the Causes of Disunion: A Civil War Sesquicentennial Review of the Recent Literature, 99(2), 440-465. Retrieved from http://jah.oxfordjournals.org/content/99/2/415.full
4-Oxford University Press, M Khaddur , E. Ghareeb(1997).War in the Gulf, 1990-91.Retrieved from http://books.google.ca/books?hl=ar&lr=&id=-WVeDRLCj0EC&oi=fnd&pg=PA1&dq=Kuwait+and+Iraq+war+&ots=CBRzBjsuiP&sig=cp5tRLuy6OCDCNB7-v4ud1zCJdQ&redir_esc=y
Summary (Risa)Although propagation of religion, border dispute and achieve justice cause the war, these have strong relationship with economic purpose. First, sometimes government uses the religious reason to start the war. However, it is just an ostensible reason. For example, the leader used a religious reason to start the war of crusader, but the purpose of this war was expanding the land and raising the money. Consequently, soldiers are able to feel pounder if they fight for not desire of kings or leaders but god. So the lots of government or leaders use the religious reason instead of the economic reason when they launch the war.
Comment
I think your essay is well organized and has relyable evidences. For example, you used an illustration of crusaders. As it was elegant example, I could understand what you want to say. You are also good word choicer. You are very good at using correct word forms. Although your research paper is great, there are some spelling and grammar mistakes. In your first paragraph, you need to reduce “to” between “why they” and “fight.” In the second paragraph, there are also little spelling mistakes. I listed up after this comment. I think your essay will be better if you fixed them. Thank you. Risa♡
>>Second paragraph